09-24-2003, 03:48 AM
Just to let folks know, my prereaders have prescribed some rewriting for one of my newest scenes. While I take care of that, the running total probably won't change much, but don't worry -- I am still moving ahead.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.