04-10-2016, 09:33 AM
I've written a short fanfic for Halkegenia Online. The last part (with links to the previous parts) is at:
http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/t ... st-5807136
Can anyone provide me with some comments?
I'd especially like to know which, if either, of the two main characters seemed more sensible, and if they had distinct voices.
http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/t ... st-5807136
Can anyone provide me with some comments?
I'd especially like to know which, if either, of the two main characters seemed more sensible, and if they had distinct voices.