"The Rise of the Shadow Circle" -- Arc # 425755

[Bob Schroeck]

After a little tweaking based on the comments I got a few weeks back,
I've published my arc (tagged as "Looking for feedback" since I'm not
100% satisfied with it, but satisfied enough...)

Anyway, I'd be very grateful if folks would give it a play and comment/rate it, please.

Thank you.
(ETA:  I tweaked the arc a little this morning, and the number changed
when I saved it.  Please note the new number in the threat title.)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.