RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
10-20-2019, 11:45 AM (This post was last modified: 10-20-2019, 11:45 AM by robkelk.)
10-20-2019, 11:45 AM (This post was last modified: 10-20-2019, 11:45 AM by robkelk.)
(10-19-2019, 10:59 PM)Black Aeronaut Wrote: And done.
That's removed over 7,500 words from the Halloween story that don't really do much to move the plot forward. I can put the content into a side story instead.
Rest assured, it's saved on my computer. Besides, if you really want it in there, you can just revert the changes I made. But I think this is the better way to go. The Halloween Party Story shouldn't be where I dump my own personal issues.
I've put a little bit back in, but only the bare minimum to make stories that are already posted here still make sense.
(10-20-2019, 05:45 AM)Rajvik Wrote: Rob, i thought we had the invitations/reactions to them in the chatlog thread?
i could be wrong, and i'll try and check it later today.
I don't remember them... Thanks for checking.
Dartz, I need the 33-Stars' reply to the invitation, too. I assume it would come from Data...?
I'll have to do the Montreal apartment's reply myself, unless somebody else writes it first.
Speaking of the Montreal apartment, Saber now has a costume defined. My thanks to Blade for the suggestion.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown