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[OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
(10-24-2019, 04:44 AM)Labster Wrote:
the story Wrote:Ritsuko nodded. "You wouldn't happen to know where to find the data, would you?"
FFS guys Mr. Data is at the party and no one wrote a scene for him.

Is he, though?
(10-20-2019, 11:55 AM)Dartz Wrote: Data may not have been discovered yet - he didn't find the Stars until after they started going public.



(10-24-2019, 06:07 PM)Black Aeronaut Wrote:
(10-24-2019, 03:26 PM)Labster Wrote: Autism in the Twenty-First Century

.... Rob, I think Brent is dropping hints here.  :V

All over the floor, too. Time to get the mop... Smile


(10-24-2019, 06:07 PM)Black Aeronaut Wrote: Personally, I'd be willing to exchange one scene for another, but the bit I did for Rei was some great development for her as well.

However, I'd be willing to rewrite it so it's less about Ben and more about Rei.  This way, while it would traverse the same ground covered before, it would be entirely about how she handles being confronted by it.

Besides, after the scene with Fate and Nanoha, Ben would be in a somewhat different frame of mind.

Thoughts?

Rei mentions her talk with Ben in a chronologically-later story, so something has to happen...
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RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals - by robkelk - 10-24-2019, 06:25 PM

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