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[OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
Dartz, I haven't had the chance to say it lately, but that last post in The Ghost Inside is really good.  You really share the feeling of coming to terms with yourself.

My one complaint is to check the line endings, all the way through.  There are a lot with no period, or two periods, or this:

Nam sat on the floor in front of the television, blasting her way through a game against a

Don't leave me hangin', man.
"Kitto daijoubu da yo." - Sakura Kinomoto


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RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Fifth Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals - by Labster - 11-27-2019, 02:50 PM

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