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WOW.
Even preliminary rough-draft-ish whatever, it's cool.
Oh, and, just so's y'know, Acyl... don't feel that it's absolutely necessary to stick sunglasses on Rhea; the expression you've got on her
right now is wonderful. I only went with the sunglasses in-game on that particular costume because it seemed like she needed -something- on the face, and
sunglasses were the least intrusive.
I may revise it, now. Heh.
--sofaspud
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The pose of Marcus and Space together is great Acyl! LOVE IT!
I'm not sure on Marcus' face though. It looks..... odd. I realize it's a profileish shot, but it's like it's missing definition, and width.
Space's face looks a little flat too.
The pose though is awesome.
HUGS! -C-
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Joy! Why am I now compelled to write a story to match that very comic book cover. Eagerly looking forward to the final draft.
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Acyl I love the pic its soo made of a new flavor of win, Sure terr should be a little wider and significantly more heavly muscled *yes his built like a brick
wall* and his arm does look uncomfortable but they really doo look like a team ready to beat up the bad guys and have fun...and look good doin so *grin*.
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I'm thinking it'd be possible, for Terrence...to effectively rotate the torso by shifting most of the chest and t-shirt lines to the left. Redrawing some of 'em, but that shouldn't be too onorous. Could add more muscle definition at the same time. Redrawing the biceps and shoulder bits past the forearm wrappings shouldn't be too hard either. All of that should fix some of the issues, and make him look wider and bulkier to boot.
As I mentioned, I'm not so good at drawing heavily built physical proportions, and perspective is kinda a hit-and-miss game. The feedback's valuable, thus...I also didn't realise how extreme the arm looked when taken with the figure as a whole, so it's good that you folks pointed it out. =D
Regarding the glasses on Rhea - I'll make a decision when I get to inking her.
For Marcus and Space...I'm not satisfied with the faces on either actually. Aside from the stubble on Marcus. Else I know what you mean...but I can't think of a quick-fix...perhaps a touch more shading, but I dunno. For Marcus the head is basically just awkward 'cause of the cowboy hat, really...I drew the head around the hat, not the other way around, because hats are a new and alien territory for me in the uncharted realms of here be haberdashery. =( But the pose, yeah, the pose was the main thing really. Glad that worked.
-- Acyl
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