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		09-25-2006, 09:49 PM 
	 
	
		"If you ever run out of ideas, have someone come through the door with a gun." 
- Raymond Chandler 
"If you put a gun on the mantlepiece in Act 1, it must be fired no later than the end of Act 3." 
- Anton Chekhov 
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		09-25-2006, 09:54 PM 
	 
	
		Quote: "If you ever run out of ideas, have someone come through the door with a gun."
  
Ah. I know that one. Though I usually phrase it as 'When in doubt, maim someone'. 
Um.
 
"Too many flavors spoil the broth." 
- moi, bastardizing. 
In relation to some authors' fondness of oversaturating the story with unneeded plot devices. I've been guilty of that one myself, on more than one occasion, so I try to keep it in mind. With a varying degree of success. 
  -Griever
 When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force. 
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		09-25-2006, 10:32 PM 
	 
	
		'Be prepared to kill your babies' - advice from an author, name forgotten. 
I.e edit your own work without mercy. It doesn't matter how brilliant a paragraph/plot element is, if it doesn't contribute to the larger story, out it goes. You can always use it in a different story later.
	 
	
	
	
		
	 
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		09-26-2006, 01:12 AM 
	 
	
		Quote: "If you ever run out of ideas, have someone come through the door with a gun." 
- Raymond Chandler 
"If you put a gun on the mantlepiece in Act 1, it must be fired no later than the end of Act 3." 
- Anton Chekhov
  
"If you have someone come through the door with a gun, make certain its the one you put on the mantlepiece in Act 1." 
-me 
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		09-26-2006, 05:07 AM 
	 
	
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		09-26-2006, 07:07 AM 
	 
	
		"You can never go wrong marketing to idiots." 
(Wait, that's advice for writing for tv, not for writing well...) 
-Morgan, tries to think of something non-sarcastic..."I have no interest in ordinary humans. If there are any aliens, time travelers, or espers here, come sleep with me." 
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		09-26-2006, 08:30 AM 
	 
	
		You can eat or make love on your own shedule but writing and sleeping depend on that of your muse. 
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		10-03-2006, 07:21 PM 
	 
	
		Know on the first page where you're heading towards on the last page.
	 
	
	
	
		
	 
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		10-03-2006, 10:54 PM 
	 
	
		"Writing is easy; I just stare at the paper until my forehead bleeds."  - Ernest Hemingway.Ebony the Black Dragon 
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		10-12-2006, 03:18 AM 
	 
	
		[Inspired by the movie playing at work today...] 
Chekhov's Shark: If you put a shark in the water in Act 1, it should be soup no later than Act 3. 
(I get the feeling I'm not over that sarcasm thing yet...) 
-Morgan. "The Little Mermaid", in case you were wondering. 
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		10-12-2006, 01:32 PM 
	 
	
		'Everyone gets edited'  Stephen King 
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		10-12-2006, 02:04 PM 
	 
	
		More seriously, the one I just spouted yesterday in the Legendary forum, slightly revised: 
The best bad guys believe that they are good guys. 
-- Bob 
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		10-12-2006, 02:47 PM 
	 
	
		Read 'Eyes of Argon' and do the exact oppisite. -------------------- 
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		10-12-2006, 10:24 PM 
	 
	
		Quote: Read 'Dhalgren' and do the exact oppisite.
  
 
Fixed your typo. 
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