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		So glad to oblige.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
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		Shinji and Warhammer 40K returns with 
Chapter 24:  Timeskip Troubles pt 1
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
	
 
	
	
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		I do like the new A Mother's Love prequel very much... But Chapter 100 of A Mother's Love seems... Rushed. I know that he could have
made that chapter a lot more interesting. There were just so many oportunities to do so... And he takes the short and easy way. So very disapointing. So very
anticlimatic.
Were I writing the story, there would have been a hell of a battle between the Akatsuki and their ninja underlings against Naruto and a whole mess of Fox
demons/kitsune. No need to call in the Kyuubi him/herself.
Just hope that the Epilogue chapter is better.
	
	
	
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
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		Two new chapter of Serpent in Paradise II (Lord of the Rings + Modern people) 
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1794811/28/ ... Two_Powers
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."