The second part is coherent enough if that's what you are worried about.
I like it, even if it's a little messier than I ussually read.
it makes the first part non-depressing if that makes any sense.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
I like it, even if it's a little messier than I ussually read.
it makes the first part non-depressing if that makes any sense.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."