Yes it is disjointed, but it feels right because we are just hearing one side of a telphone (or reasonable facismile thereof) conversation.
It is pretty good as a one shot but I don't think it's worth extending,
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
It is pretty good as a one shot but I don't think it's worth extending,
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."