Quote:If I understand correctly, the Redbyrd stuff is actually a collaboration between two writers (it's more clearly spelled out in Neoinean's profile). That might explain the uneven prose quality in some sections, or it might be bad editing in melding bits. I dunno.
That is a pretty sweet story, but his grasp on grammer, specifically tense shifting, seems to be getting worse as it goes on (up to chapter 9 so far) and it's starting to drive me nuts.
-- Acyl