The warning proved enough for it to calculate trajectory, ballistic properties of the rounds, and alter its course to slip under the projected line of fire, into the shadow of the chaff that had, a moment ago, been its companion.
Maybe it's just me, but shouldn't it be something like 'proved enough for it's partner' or 'enough for the other'?
It sorta reads like the one that just got blasted is altering course.
Other than that, I think it was pretty good.__________________
We are not ninjas, we are a hedge. Please move along.
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin
Maybe it's just me, but shouldn't it be something like 'proved enough for it's partner' or 'enough for the other'?
It sorta reads like the one that just got blasted is altering course.
Other than that, I think it was pretty good.__________________
We are not ninjas, we are a hedge. Please move along.
___________________________
"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin