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Machine Spirit 1-3
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2
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whee goodie. I wonder what Largo told Anri. Other than that I can't spot any errors, though the conversation between Sylvie and Priss is shrowded in mystery, and I'm not sure if it's intentional or not. Hoping for more soon.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
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Machine Spirit 1-3 - by Rieverre - 05-13-2006, 11:48 PM
Machine Spirit 1-3 - by drakensis - 05-14-2006, 09:12 AM
Re: Machine Spirit 1-3 - by Norgarth - 05-14-2006, 11:38 PM
here, have a bundle - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 04:54 PM
ahh goodness - by Guest - 05-15-2006, 08:37 PM
re: ahh goodness - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 09:00 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-22-2006, 10:54 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 11:19 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by Rieverre - 11-22-2006, 02:54 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 04:05 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-23-2006, 11:37 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-23-2006, 12:06 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-23-2006, 03:58 PM
Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by Rieverre - 11-26-2006, 01:35 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by CattyNebulart - 11-26-2006, 02:11 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by A117 - 11-27-2006, 06:05 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by Rieverre - 11-27-2006, 06:58 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by CattyNebulart - 11-27-2006, 08:13 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by Bob Schroeck - 11-27-2006, 10:38 PM
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