Good though not sure where this is going. I tend to focus on the main character (main themes) and the secondary characters later. Greiver ... I would like the self insertion more if you wrote about the DD more and its interactions with the other characters. I'm biased that way.
Stories with a lot of characters are difficult for me to keep track of. I tend to focus on two or three of the characters and only read over the rest later ...
If you have read BGC self-insertions before, I think this was the approach used by a number of (self-insertion) writers.
Twisted Path 3 by Darren Steffler
A Boomer's Life by Baran3
The Bubblebum Zone by Bert Van Vliet
Soul of the Machine by Richard Drysdale
Bubblegum Advocatus Custodes Hell's Fury by Knight-Hawk Jr.
Bubblegum Avatar by Craig A Reed, Jr.
Was there anyone else that I left out?
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Stories with a lot of characters are difficult for me to keep track of. I tend to focus on two or three of the characters and only read over the rest later ...
If you have read BGC self-insertions before, I think this was the approach used by a number of (self-insertion) writers.
Twisted Path 3 by Darren Steffler
A Boomer's Life by Baran3
The Bubblebum Zone by Bert Van Vliet
Soul of the Machine by Richard Drysdale
Bubblegum Advocatus Custodes Hell's Fury by Knight-Hawk Jr.
Bubblegum Avatar by Craig A Reed, Jr.
Was there anyone else that I left out?