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Machine Spirit 1-3
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2
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Good though not sure where this is going. I tend to focus on the main character (main themes) and the secondary characters later. Greiver ... I would like the self insertion more if you wrote about the DD more and its interactions with the other characters. I'm biased that way. [Image: devil.gif] [Image: devil.gif] [Image: devil.gif]
Stories with a lot of characters are difficult for me to keep track of. I tend to focus on two or three of the characters and only read over the rest later ...
If you have read BGC self-insertions before, I think this was the approach used by a number of (self-insertion) writers.
Twisted Path 3 by Darren Steffler
A Boomer's Life by Baran3
The Bubblebum Zone by Bert Van Vliet
Soul of the Machine by Richard Drysdale
Bubblegum Advocatus Custodes Hell's Fury by Knight-Hawk Jr.
Bubblegum Avatar by Craig A Reed, Jr.
Was there anyone else that I left out?
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Machine Spirit 1-3 - by Rieverre - 05-13-2006, 11:48 PM
Machine Spirit 1-3 - by drakensis - 05-14-2006, 09:12 AM
Re: Machine Spirit 1-3 - by Norgarth - 05-14-2006, 11:38 PM
here, have a bundle - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 04:54 PM
ahh goodness - by Guest - 05-15-2006, 08:37 PM
re: ahh goodness - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 09:00 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-22-2006, 10:54 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 11:19 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by Rieverre - 11-22-2006, 02:54 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 04:05 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-23-2006, 11:37 AM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by CattyNebulart - 11-23-2006, 12:06 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by A117 - 11-23-2006, 03:58 PM
Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by Rieverre - 11-26-2006, 01:35 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by CattyNebulart - 11-26-2006, 02:11 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by A117 - 11-27-2006, 06:05 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by Rieverre - 11-27-2006, 06:58 PM
Re: Machine Spirit Ch.4 - part 2 - by CattyNebulart - 11-27-2006, 08:13 PM
Re: re: ahh goodness - by Bob Schroeck - 11-27-2006, 10:38 PM
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re: Quote - by Rieverre - 11-28-2006, 03:54 PM
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