Title, yeah. Picked it for the overarching theme in general. That, and I liked the idea of a journey metaphor for all the individual chapter headings. Of course, it's still subject to change, if there's something better.
As for Naruto...hm, well, I gotta think about that. It's a concern if he's...too left of centre or something.
I mean, y'know, it's a Naruto fic, he's the title character. Admittedly, his lines in this chapter are pretty much fluff - hell, the 'I'm gonna win' rant is a riff on Starlight Express...but I've got some pretty major stuff planned for him later in the story.
So...I can live with a portrayal that's not exactly spot-on, but if he's coming off totally wrong, then that worries me. Gotta think about majorly tweaking those lines, perhaps.
-- Acyl
As for Naruto...hm, well, I gotta think about that. It's a concern if he's...too left of centre or something.
I mean, y'know, it's a Naruto fic, he's the title character. Admittedly, his lines in this chapter are pretty much fluff - hell, the 'I'm gonna win' rant is a riff on Starlight Express...but I've got some pretty major stuff planned for him later in the story.
So...I can live with a portrayal that's not exactly spot-on, but if he's coming off totally wrong, then that worries me. Gotta think about majorly tweaking those lines, perhaps.
-- Acyl