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The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft
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Naruto's gung-ho, all right, but that stuff before the free-for-all kinda went beyond his limits. In fact, if I were in his shoes, I wouldn't quite draw so much attention to myself.
You probably wouldn't, and I wouldn't, but Naruto would, particularly Naruto this early in the series. He really can be that stupid. [Image: smile.gif]
It's perfectly in character for Naruto to boast that he's going to win and do some trash talking in this situation... it's just the particular way he does it in this draft that seems off to me.
Like always, just my opinion.
Aaron Nowack

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Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 05:42 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 06:54 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 07:33 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by anowack - 11-09-2006, 01:14 AM

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