Quote:True enough, but it's amusing enough for me to keep on reading for light entertainment. It's not bad for a first work.
I remember reading this one a while ago, and that was my general impression as well. Unless the author's changed his approach in the last two or so chapters that he's released since that time, then no.
Now if you guys have any recommendations for a Negima fanfic...
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