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Rage Across Gundam Seed
Rage Across Gundam Seed
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On a bench in a Heliopolis park, a strange tableau was laid out. Looming over the trees, an advanced looking mobile suit knelt on the ground. On one of the benches lay a woman wearing orange coveralls - Lieutenant Maria Ramius of the Earth Alliance, wounded earlier in the day by one of the ZAFT commandos who had successfully seized four of the five Mobile Suit prototypes developed jointly by the Atlantic Federation and the Orb Union.
Watching over the Lieutenant was a young woman, Mirialla Haw, who was providing little more than nervous chaperonage to the man tending the lieutenant's wounds. "She's waking," she cried as Maria groaned and rolled her head.
"Ayup," the man replied, knoting off a bandage he'd wrapped around Maria's shoulder. "I'll rely on your testimony as to my conduct then."
Maria's brown eyes flickered and then she reflexively jerked away from the man, recoiling almost off the bench before he caught hold of her with a firm grip. "Don't move yet," he ordered absently.
"Kira!" called the girl, summoning one of the young men who had been attending to the giant robot only a few metres away.
Maria's eyes hardened as she remembered the earlier events of the day - the sudden attack and the loss of the mobiles suits, being shot by one of the raiders and then the desperate fight as first she and then the young man she saw approaching had fought off a ZAFT Jinn in the towering Strike Gundam, only to be stunned when the damaged mobile suit self-destructed almost on top of them.
"I'm so sorry," Kira began, looking ashamed of himself. "It was my fault."
"Keh," the man said dismissively. "Those commando types all running around, shooting guns, and then those giants fighting - the lad's probably the only reason you got off so lightly, and all he does is apologise."
"Have some water," the girl offered and Maria accepted the offered bottle, glad for a moment to think before having to respond to Kira. She was puzzled at why the boy wasn't looking straight at her, then realised that her jumpsuit was open to the waist and had been tugged off her right side. Her reflexive attempt to cover herself didn't do much more than lose the water bottle (Kira caught it before it reached the ground) and elict a yelp as she put pressure on her shoulder.
"I had to open your shirt to get to the shoulder," the man told her calmly after she had steadied herself. "Strictly professional - the lass can vouch for my behavior."
Maria was trying to regain her composure when a snatch of conversation came from the three boys still entranced by the war machine.
"This is a great Gundam. Can you move it or not?"
"You guys, don't mess with it!" called the oldest of them, who remained on the ground. As a wonder, the boy in the cockpit emerged without trying to move it.
"Why is it gray again?" asked the third boy.
"Because the main battery is off," replied the second boy.
"Stay away from it!" Maria shouted, her pistol in her hand almost before she realised it. A warning shot glanced off the armor plate between the pair on the machine and they cringed reflexively. An instant later, the gun was out of her hand and she whirled, eyes tracking it, to see the man who claimed to have treated her wound holding the pistol by the barrel.
"What are you doing?" Kira protested. "They're the ones who brought you out of the machine when you were unconcious!"
Maria ignored him glaring up at the only adult in the group. He returned her stare with an air of amusement, then examined the pistol and tentatively tapped one of the levers, causing the clip to fall to the ground. "Tsk," he said, working the action in a professional manner quite unlike the awkward grip he'd used earlier, and letting the live round eject into the air. "I'm so clumsy today. This is yours, I believe," he added innocently and passed the empty gun to her.
"Who are you?" Maria asked, cautiously accepting the weapon.
"A roll of the dice that went your way," the man replied. Now that she looked at him, he was out of place amongst the little group. Not just in age - although he certainly looked closer to her age than any of the teenagers - but in everything! He was almost painfully thin, his tall frame topped with a ragged beard and shaggy locks of corn-blond hair that was obviously the result of neglect rather than deliberate styling. His clothes were odd - a red leather jacket, tough pants and a shirt that looked like it belonged in a video of the pre-Cosmic Era times - and his eyes... Maria shivered as she looked into those grey-blue eyes. She had never realised how dark that shade could be when the eyes were shadowed by more than just the light. "The name is Thomas Finn."
It was almost a relief as the kids introduced themselves. If nothing else, it gaver her an opportunity to palm a spare clip of ammunition from her belt and slip it discreetly into her pistol.
"I thank you for saving me. My name is Maria Ramius. I am a Second Lieutenant of the Allied Military," Maria told them. "I'm sorry, but that is the military's top secret. It's not something people should touch."
"What? Kira-chan was the one who was operating the machine," protested Toru.
"I cannot let you go," Maria added, raising the gun again, this time keeping the gun pointed squarely at Thomas, who was evidently the major threat.
"WHAT!?"
"Whatever the reason, since you guys saw the secret, you have to stay with me until I have contacted the offical board of directors and receive their orders."
The babble that exploded was almost louder than the sound of a gunfight and Maria was about to fire off another round (into the air this time) to get their attention when there was a sharp crack from the back of the group as Thomas clapped his hands together. "Lieutenant Ramius is correct," he said firmly.
"We're Heliopolis citizens!" Sai protested. "We are neutral! We have nothing to do with the military and those sort of things."
Thomas pointed up at the Gundam. "That was built here wasn't it? For the Allied Military? That doesn't sound neutral to me. I don't think that those commando boys believed it either. They came in shooting - that puts all of us in the middle of a war whether we like it or not. And in any war there are only two sorts of people - those who act and those who are acted upon. The latter are called victims and I don't recommend it."
"But why can't we just go to one of the shelters!" protested Mirialla.
"Because the other side would hunt you down to find out what you know about the Gundam," Thomas said bleakly. "And the lieutenant's side would hunt you down to keep you from telling it. Unless you think you can take them both on, your best shot is to co-operate with one group or another - and she's here and has a gun."
"What about you?" Kira asked.
"She smells trustworthy," Thomas answered. "So I guess I'll trust her. For now, anyway." Then he brightened. "Besides, someone has to look after than gunshot wound of hers. I'm sure that that leaves me with some sort of moral obligation to take off her shirt again..."
Maria almost shot him.
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Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-21-2006, 12:21 AM
re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by ordnance11 - 06-21-2006, 02:45 AM
feedback - by Logan Darklighter - 06-21-2006, 02:50 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-21-2006, 03:33 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-21-2006, 11:42 AM
hehe ... - by Rieverre - 06-21-2006, 05:26 PM
Re: hehe ... - by ClassicDrogn - 06-21-2006, 10:50 PM
Re: hehe ... - by happerry - 06-22-2006, 05:35 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-22-2006, 09:14 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-22-2006, 11:05 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-23-2006, 04:59 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Elsa Bibat - 06-23-2006, 04:23 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-23-2006, 07:01 PM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-26-2006, 11:18 PM
Whee, more to read - by Logan Darklighter - 06-27-2006, 02:19 AM
re: Whee, more to read - by drakensis - 06-27-2006, 09:53 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-29-2006, 08:02 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-29-2006, 09:15 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-03-2006, 10:57 PM
Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-04-2006, 02:59 AM
This is where things change - by ordnance11 - 07-04-2006, 05:05 PM
> This is where things change - by drakensis - 07-04-2006, 09:49 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-05-2006, 05:37 PM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-06-2006, 09:57 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-06-2006, 11:27 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-07-2006, 02:52 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-08-2006, 04:38 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-08-2006, 02:34 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-09-2006, 04:30 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-09-2006, 05:17 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-11-2006, 03:48 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-11-2006, 09:52 PM
Wow. - by katreus - 07-13-2006, 03:52 AM
Which reminds me... - by katreus - 07-13-2006, 07:25 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-14-2006, 01:00 PM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-15-2006, 06:27 PM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Norgarth - 07-16-2006, 01:17 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 07-16-2006, 01:22 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 07-16-2006, 05:27 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-16-2006, 07:05 AM
Drak: - by katreus - 07-17-2006, 03:15 AM
Speaking of Which... - by DKnight54 - 07-17-2006, 03:16 AM
Re: Speaking of Which... - by drakensis - 07-17-2006, 09:07 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-18-2006, 07:49 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by katreus - 07-21-2006, 04:34 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-21-2006, 07:10 AM
Sitting in the brdige chair - by ordnance11 - 07-21-2006, 09:23 PM
Re: Sitting in the brdige chair - by drakensis - 07-22-2006, 06:57 PM
Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 07-23-2006, 03:00 AM
Doing a Belisarius... - by ordnance11 - 07-23-2006, 06:44 PM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-02-2006, 04:52 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by drakensis - 08-02-2006, 08:21 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by katreus - 08-02-2006, 08:26 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-03-2006, 02:42 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-06-2006, 01:59 PM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-06-2006, 06:35 PM
A bit of crazy... - by Elsa Bibat - 08-20-2006, 09:00 PM
re: A bit of crazy - by DKnight54 - 08-20-2006, 09:28 PM
Re: re: A bit of crazy - by Elsa Bibat - 08-20-2006, 09:53 PM
More ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-21-2006, 04:43 PM
Re: More ke-ray-zee - by Norgarth - 08-22-2006, 12:34 AM
Re: More ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-22-2006, 09:07 AM
Even more ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-22-2006, 11:37 AM
Not what's next - by Valles - 09-05-2006, 09:53 PM
re: Not what's next - by Rieverre - 09-05-2006, 11:36 PM
Re: re: Not what's next - by Valles - 09-06-2006, 04:51 AM
Re: re: Not what's next - by Rieverre - 09-06-2006, 08:14 AM

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