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284 is enough - NEW new fic rec thread
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Re: Shake Me
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01-05-2006, 10:04 PM
Meh. There seems to be a good story lurking in there somewhere -- it's keeping me reading so far -- but it's almost completely obscured by an amateurish narrative voice, rampant homophone misspellings, missing words, and the inability to make characters talk like they do in the books. (And I don't mean Harry -- I accept his change in voice. It's just that Voldemort shouldn't sound like a 14-year-old.)

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Re: 284 is enough - NEW new fic rec thread - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-05-2006, 01:08 AM
Wellllllll... - by Valles - 01-05-2006, 07:28 PM
Re: Shake Me - by Bob Schroeck - 01-05-2006, 10:04 PM
Re: Wellllllll... - by Bob Schroeck - 01-05-2006, 10:07 PM
What is up with FF.net now? - by Bob Schroeck - 01-05-2006, 10:09 PM
Re: What is up with FF.net now? - by Star Ranger4 - 01-05-2006, 10:42 PM
Re: What is up with FF.net now? - by jpub - 01-05-2006, 11:19 PM
ff.net and ads - by Logan Darklighter - 01-06-2006, 02:02 AM
Fics - by Florin - 01-06-2006, 02:03 AM
Re: Fics - by VladimirTherin - 01-07-2006, 05:23 PM
Re: Fics - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-09-2006, 11:06 PM
Re: Fics - by Disruptor - 01-10-2006, 02:26 AM
Re: Fics - by Bob Schroeck - 01-10-2006, 05:00 PM
Re: Fics - by jpub - 01-10-2006, 09:03 PM
Re: Fics - by jpub - 01-11-2006, 05:26 AM
Re: Fics - by Disruptor - 01-12-2006, 03:08 AM
Re: Fics - by Aleh - 01-12-2006, 06:49 AM
Re: Fics - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-12-2006, 10:20 PM
Re: Fics - by Angryoptimist - 01-13-2006, 02:05 PM
Re: Fics - by Aleh - 01-15-2006, 09:09 AM
Super-Harry - by Darwithe - 01-16-2006, 09:38 AM
Re: Super-Harry - by Bob Schroeck - 01-16-2006, 05:13 PM
Re: Year in the Life - by drakensis - 01-19-2006, 03:37 AM
Re: Year in the Life - by jpub - 01-19-2006, 03:46 AM
more liz_marcs - by katreus - 01-20-2006, 11:50 AM
Whoops - by hmelton - 01-21-2006, 04:44 AM
True Angel - by drakensis - 01-22-2006, 02:01 PM
Re: True Angel - by ClassicDrogn - 01-22-2006, 10:34 PM
Re: True Angel - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-22-2006, 11:41 PM
Re: True Angel - by katreus - 01-23-2006, 06:19 AM
//\//\//\//\ - by mrfix186 - 01-23-2006, 09:32 PM
Re: True Angel - by ClassicDrogn - 01-24-2006, 01:48 PM
Re: True Angel - by katreus - 01-24-2006, 09:38 PM
Re: True Angel - by ECSNorway - 01-25-2006, 07:00 PM
... - by jpub - 01-26-2006, 03:19 AM
"Silent High" - by Angryoptimist - 01-26-2006, 05:28 AM
Re: ... - by ClassicDrogn - 01-26-2006, 01:11 PM
surprisingly ... - by Rieverre - 01-26-2006, 04:57 PM
These Dreams - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-26-2006, 06:25 PM
Re: These Dreams - by VladimirTherin - 01-26-2006, 08:30 PM
Re: These Dreams - by Deadpan29 - 01-26-2006, 08:38 PM
Re: These Dreams - by jpub - 01-26-2006, 08:55 PM
Re: These Dreams - by Disruptor - 01-27-2006, 12:25 AM
Re: These Dreams - by Ebony - 01-27-2006, 01:52 AM
Re: These Dreams - by katreus - 01-28-2006, 09:04 AM
Re: These Dreams - by VladimirTherin - 01-28-2006, 01:36 PM
tis hilarious - by Rieverre - 01-29-2006, 04:22 AM
A different take - by ClassicDrogn - 01-30-2006, 12:46 PM
Re: A different take - by happerry - 01-30-2006, 10:58 PM
Re: A different take - by jpub - 01-31-2006, 05:08 AM
Re: A different take - by happerry - 02-01-2006, 10:21 AM
Re: A different take - by katreus - 02-01-2006, 10:52 AM
Re: A different take - by happerry - 02-01-2006, 09:24 PM
Re: A different take - by katreus - 02-01-2006, 09:47 PM
Re: A different take - by Bob Schroeck - 02-02-2006, 03:17 AM
Re: A different take - by Valles - 02-03-2006, 08:05 AM
Re: A different take - by Bob Schroeck - 02-03-2006, 05:15 PM
Re: A different take - by VladimirTherin - 02-04-2006, 10:16 AM
Re: Mai Harem - by Rieverre - 02-04-2006, 02:17 PM
Re: Mai Harem - by Valles - 02-04-2006, 07:08 PM
First fanfic - by hmelton - 02-04-2006, 08:13 PM
Re: A different take - by Bob Schroeck - 02-04-2006, 09:04 PM
Re: A different take - by Aleh - 02-05-2006, 04:58 AM
Re: A different take - by Bob Schroeck - 02-05-2006, 06:33 AM
Old soldiers - by Deadpan29 - 02-05-2006, 07:48 AM
Shinji and PenPens Big Adventure - by drakensis - 02-05-2006, 02:07 PM
naruto fic - by mrfix186 - 02-08-2006, 09:34 AM
Re: naruto fic - by VladimirTherin - 02-08-2006, 05:19 PM
New fanficauthors.net - by jpub - 02-10-2006, 09:02 AM
The Right Technology - by hmelton - 02-12-2006, 12:34 AM
Re: The Right Technology - by Bob Schroeck - 02-13-2006, 06:14 PM
Re: The Right Technology - by ClassicDrogn - 02-13-2006, 09:23 PM
Re: The Right Technology - by Bob Schroeck - 02-13-2006, 09:58 PM
Re: Crossover - by Darwithe - 02-15-2006, 12:02 AM
Between a rock and... - by HoagieOfDoom - 02-15-2006, 08:18 AM
Small Dimensional Crisis - by happerry - 02-15-2006, 09:11 PM
Re: Small Dimensional Crisis - by Bob Schroeck - 02-15-2006, 10:10 PM
Re: Between a rock and... - by sweno - 02-16-2006, 05:35 AM
No Good Deed - by WengFook - 02-16-2006, 06:09 AM
Far Beyond Normal - by RMH999 - 02-16-2006, 06:32 AM
Re: Far Beyond Normal - by Bob Schroeck - 02-16-2006, 09:56 PM
Re: Between a rock and... - by Bob Schroeck - 02-16-2006, 09:57 PM
Re: Between a rock and... - by jpub - 02-16-2006, 11:40 PM
Upon a Fiery Steed - by SkyeFire - 02-27-2006, 05:53 AM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by katreus - 02-27-2006, 06:09 AM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by M Fnord - 02-27-2006, 07:03 AM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by ClassicDrogn - 02-27-2006, 07:25 AM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by VladimirTherin - 02-27-2006, 08:15 AM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by drakensis - 02-27-2006, 12:35 PM
Re: Upon a Fiery Steed - by ClassicDrogn - 02-27-2006, 01:13 PM
A Lois & Clark Fanfic - by hmelton - 02-28-2006, 06:49 AM
Read it for the articles... - by ClassicDrogn - 03-01-2006, 11:31 AM
Datum of Random Silliness +3 - by ECSNorway - 03-01-2006, 06:11 PM
Re: 284 is enough - NEW new fic rec thread - by WengFook - 03-03-2006, 05:56 AM
Fields of Iron - by hmelton - 03-04-2006, 05:31 AM
Fission - by werehawk - 03-07-2006, 07:36 AM
Re: Fission - by Kheram Coldstar - 03-08-2006, 04:27 AM
Re: Fission - by ECSNorway - 03-08-2006, 07:07 AM
Re: Sufficiently Advanced Technology - by WengFook - 03-09-2006, 05:30 AM
Re: Sufficiently Advanced Technology - by jpub - 03-09-2006, 07:35 AM
Re: Sufficiently Advanced Technology - by WengFook - 03-09-2006, 12:19 PM
new dark scribler - by Logan Darklighter - 03-10-2006, 07:33 AM
Another Story - by ECSNorway - 03-11-2006, 04:56 AM
Re: Another Story - by Aleh - 03-11-2006, 08:04 PM
Re: Another Story - by Aleh - 03-11-2006, 11:54 PM
Baeraad - by kentmagus - 03-13-2006, 09:08 AM
Re: Baeraad - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 03-15-2006, 03:07 AM
Re: Re: Baeraad - by kentmagus - 03-15-2006, 08:38 AM
Re: Baeraad - by Bob Schroeck - 03-15-2006, 05:04 PM
Re: 284 is enough - NEW new fic rec thread - by Elsa Bibat - 03-16-2006, 05:15 PM
Re: Inevitable by Mhalachai - by Xenoproctologist - 03-17-2006, 12:08 PM
The Assitant. - by Jinx999 - 03-21-2006, 12:24 PM
A new BtVS fic I've posted on my LJ - by jpub - 03-30-2006, 10:38 AM
C. S. Lewis Fic - by happerry - 03-31-2006, 07:21 AM
Edenfalling - by Valles - 03-31-2006, 08:05 AM
Unlikely Heroes - by happerry - 03-31-2006, 11:45 PM
Re: 284 is enough - NEW new fic rec thread - by Elsa Bibat - 04-01-2006, 11:18 AM
The Devil Is In The Details... - by hmelton - 04-02-2006, 01:50 AM
Garden of Sanctuary - by WengFook - 04-05-2006, 09:43 AM
A Year Like No Other - by Sirrocco - 04-08-2006, 06:13 AM
Interesting Firefly/BSG fic - by Zojojojo - 04-08-2006, 05:02 PM
Re: The Birthday Present - by Custos Sophiae - 04-13-2006, 10:42 PM
Re: The Birthday Present - by jpub - 04-14-2006, 06:50 AM
Re: The Birthday Present - by Bob Schroeck - 04-14-2006, 02:00 PM
Re: Hollow - by happerry - 04-14-2006, 07:28 PM
Re: Hollow - by Necratoid - 04-15-2006, 06:01 AM
Re: Hollow - by happerry - 04-15-2006, 09:14 AM
Re: Hollow - by jpub - 04-15-2006, 03:39 PM
Re: The Birthday Present - by Duane Peters - 04-16-2006, 06:13 AM
Re: The Birthday Present - by Aleh - 04-18-2006, 01:12 AM
Re: The Birthday Present - by Aleh - 04-18-2006, 03:16 PM
Firefly/Riddick story - by Zojojojo - 04-19-2006, 01:46 PM
Re: Firefly/Riddick story - by WengFook - 04-20-2006, 09:17 AM
expanded capacity for verbiage - by Foxboy - 04-23-2006, 04:48 PM
Re: expanded capacity for verbiage - by Aleh - 04-23-2006, 07:14 PM
The Gods of ArrKelaan - by happerry - 04-24-2006, 07:49 PM
New Anita Blake crossover - by ECSNorway - 04-30-2006, 06:29 PM
? - by HoagieOfDoom - 04-30-2006, 07:09 PM
Re: New Anita Blake crossover - by Norgarth - 04-30-2006, 07:29 PM
Semireccomended - by ClassicDrogn - 05-01-2006, 06:42 AM
Re: Semireccomended - by WengFook - 05-02-2006, 07:29 AM
Re: Semireccomended - by ClassicDrogn - 05-02-2006, 09:25 PM
Re: Semireccomended - by Acyl - 05-03-2006, 06:12 AM
Re: Semireccomended - by Aleh - 05-03-2006, 01:36 PM
Re: Beast Lord - by Bob Schroeck - 05-03-2006, 01:53 PM
Re: Beast Lord - by Aleh - 05-03-2006, 07:46 PM
Re: Beast Lord - by Bob Schroeck - 05-04-2006, 01:50 PM
An Utterly Original HP fic - by Bob Schroeck - 05-06-2006, 03:15 AM
Re: An Utterly Original HP fic - by Stephen Mann - 05-07-2006, 08:16 PM
I am ph1ll3d with ph33r - by ClassicDrogn - 05-08-2006, 10:48 AM
Odd pairing - by Luca Nicolai - 05-08-2006, 04:29 PM
Re: Odd pairing - by jpub - 05-08-2006, 07:09 PM
Re: Odd pairing - by ClassicDrogn - 05-08-2006, 07:10 PM
Re: Odd pairing - by ECSNorway - 05-08-2006, 07:26 PM
Re: Odd pairing - by Custos Sophiae - 05-08-2006, 08:20 PM
Stargate HP-1 - by ECSNorway - 05-08-2006, 10:42 PM
Re: Stargate HP-1 - by WengFook - 05-09-2006, 04:21 AM
Re: Stargate HP-1 - by drakensis - 05-09-2006, 01:41 PM
Thanks - by Luca Nicolai - 05-09-2006, 02:45 PM
Re: Thanks - by katreus - 05-10-2006, 02:43 AM
Azumanga Daioh IN SPACE! - by drakensis - 05-10-2006, 01:03 PM
Re: Azumanga Daioh IN SPACE! - by WengFook - 05-11-2006, 03:23 AM
Re: Azumanga Daioh IN SPACE! - by Soutern Cross - 05-11-2006, 01:23 PM
Naruto time travel... - by Feinan - 05-14-2006, 06:23 AM
Penguingate - by Aleh - 05-15-2006, 07:01 PM
Re: Penguingate - by Bob Schroeck - 05-15-2006, 07:02 PM
Penguingate - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 07:18 PM
Re: Penguingate - by Aleh - 05-15-2006, 07:32 PM
Re: Penguingate - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 07:37 PM
Re: Bubblegum Crisis: A Story of Tokyo 1880 - by HoagieOfDoom - 05-17-2006, 05:56 AM
A "Firefly" Drabble - by Bob Schroeck - 05-18-2006, 05:44 AM
Re: A "Firefly" Drabble - by katreus - 05-19-2006, 12:44 AM
Re: Naruto Berserk - by Berk - 05-19-2006, 03:32 PM
Re: Naruto: Berserk - by Angryoptimist - 05-19-2006, 09:38 PM
try this, then - by Rieverre - 05-19-2006, 09:48 PM
Re: Harry Potter/Buffy Crossover Fic - by jpub - 05-20-2006, 03:18 AM
Re: try this, then (Full Metal Berserker) - by Angryoptimist - 05-20-2006, 07:25 AM
Re: try this, then (Full Metal Berserker) - by HoagieOfDoom - 05-21-2006, 07:46 AM
Re: try this, then (Full Metal Berserker) - by The Hunterminator - 05-21-2006, 11:16 PM
Re: try this, then (Full Metal Berserker) - by WengFook - 05-22-2006, 04:47 AM
Re: try this, then (Full Metal Berserker) - by HoagieOfDoom - 05-25-2006, 05:17 AM
Memorial Day Fic - by Periwinkle Skyye - 05-26-2006, 05:54 PM
A New Fic by ME! - by drakensis - 05-27-2006, 06:34 PM
Lost Time - by drakensis - 05-29-2006, 06:30 AM
re: a new fic - by VladimirTherin - 05-29-2006, 06:45 AM
Re: re: a new fic - by jpub - 05-29-2006, 09:45 AM
Re: re: a new fic - by katreus - 05-30-2006, 06:46 AM
Re: Lost Time - by ECSNorway - 05-30-2006, 09:40 PM
New HP Short fic - by Bob Schroeck - 05-31-2006, 02:26 PM
Lilly? - by Valles - 06-05-2006, 04:41 AM
spider-man - by katreus - 06-05-2006, 07:43 PM
Re: spider-man - by WengFook - 06-06-2006, 03:50 AM
bsg/west wing - by katreus - 06-06-2006, 03:52 AM
ShadoeFox - by happerry - 06-09-2006, 01:22 AM
Inuyasha - by Valles - 06-14-2006, 05:16 PM
Inevitable has a .... - by Zojojojo - 06-14-2006, 10:08 PM
Chapter 50 of "Make A Wish" posted - by bmull - 06-18-2006, 02:24 AM
Re: Chapter 50 of "Make A Wish" posted - by Necratoid - 06-18-2006, 03:40 AM
Re: Chapter 50 of "Make A Wish" posted - by jpub - 06-18-2006, 05:15 AM
Re: Chapter 50 of "Make A Wish" posted - by bmull - 06-18-2006, 01:52 PM
New from AlbertG - by ECSNorway - 07-06-2006, 03:23 PM
Re: New from AlbertG - by ECSNorway - 07-06-2006, 03:29 PM
Re: New from AlbertG - by ECSNorway - 07-06-2006, 04:26 PM
new story - by Logan Darklighter - 07-07-2006, 05:32 AM
re: "Maggie" - by Foxboy - 07-07-2006, 09:14 AM
Re: re: "Maggie" - by Bob Schroeck - 07-07-2006, 01:51 PM
New Rorschach's Blot - by Bob Schroeck - 07-07-2006, 02:32 PM
Re: New Rorschach's Blot - by Necratoid - 07-10-2006, 05:28 AM
Re: re: "Maggie" - by ClassicDrogn - 07-11-2006, 12:14 PM
Re: re: "Maggie" - by Bob Schroeck - 07-11-2006, 02:16 PM

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