Something that just occurred to me, due to the fic I'm reading being very bad about it.
If you are writing a first person story that switches perspective between several different characters, make it obvious as quickly as possible whose perspective a new section is from. And be very very careful about changing perspectives rapidly.
-Morgan, "... who the heck am I?""I have no interest in ordinary humans. If there are any aliens, time travelers, or espers here, come sleep with me."
---From "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
-----(Not really)
If you are writing a first person story that switches perspective between several different characters, make it obvious as quickly as possible whose perspective a new section is from. And be very very careful about changing perspectives rapidly.
-Morgan, "... who the heck am I?""I have no interest in ordinary humans. If there are any aliens, time travelers, or espers here, come sleep with me."
---From "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
-----(Not really)