I got through all the extant material in this story, and I have to agree it's quite good. I'm hoping there's more, as there are certainly enough hanging plot threads (hell, plot ropes) to carry the story for easily another 13 chapters.
I did note that 9/11 was apparently more severe in that timeline -- there was a throwaway line about the destruction not only of the WTC but of the Pentagon and the Capitol, and another about 4000 9/11 deaths.
-- Bob
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For Jor-El so loved the Earth, he sent his only begotten son...
Quote:True, but they're all reasonably within character and they are plot-relevant; as far as in-story rants go, I'd say that as a whole "Far Beyond Normal" barely merits a "1" on the Ornstead scale of intrusive opinionizing.
...and the author makes a few political points relating to current events (torture and national defense).
I did note that 9/11 was apparently more severe in that timeline -- there was a throwaway line about the destruction not only of the WTC but of the Pentagon and the Capitol, and another about 4000 9/11 deaths.
-- Bob
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For Jor-El so loved the Earth, he sent his only begotten son...