Well, for English-as-a-second-language, it came out reasonably well. A good going-over for grammar will certainly help your English skills, though, Luca.
As for the story you're telling, it's still too early to determine where you're going and how well it's going to come out. But it's got definite promise.-- Bob
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I loot faster. -- Peggy Schroeck, D&D game, in response to a crisis situation that arises while she's searching the bodies of four recent opponents.
As for the story you're telling, it's still too early to determine where you're going and how well it's going to come out. But it's got definite promise.-- Bob
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I loot faster. -- Peggy Schroeck, D&D game, in response to a crisis situation that arises while she's searching the bodies of four recent opponents.