I thought it was a great read, but if you think differently then let us agree to disagree. now if you want to see a non Harry Harry then look at Gabriel, after all he is not behaving like canon harry due to who raised him either. Also where did it say that Voldemort turns into a Hollow inside Private Drive? Because the way I read it he turned Hollow of where ever he would be in canon not in Private Drive. And he turned into a hollow because his link with Harry which was keeping him mortal was broken, not because he hung out with Harry. Also where is it said that Voldemort and Harry hang out?
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And take over for who now? I can't understand what you want this to mean.
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"Simply enough, Riddle bound his soul to your body to prevent himself from being sent to Hell or becoming a Hollow. When you became a Shinigami, it destroyed the bond keeping him from effecting the material world. When your body was destroyed, it opened him to becoming a Hollow, despite the bonds he carried with various inanimate objects."
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Now little more than a ghost, Harry was confused to see a second chain leading from his head off into the distance. Though more pressing than figuring out if he had two bodies laying around, was the fact that he could barely move, and the beast stood over him, gloating about it's good luck, "Oh-ho, you dodged again! But not enough. You're mine!"
And take over for who now? I can't understand what you want this to mean.
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That someone with all the battle ability of first level charioteer somehow got into a position of power and is going take over for a guy that can level cities (or a dead, paralyzed squirrel or paperweight, not enough info to tell) in the heavy assult force command is just painful.