Pretty good. I actually decided that Sakura was the baddie you where talking about when you gave hints in the old thread, until I remembered that since she was _on_ team seven, she couldn't be elsewhere and was too young. Never even considered time travel.
You might also want to throw in a translation for all the jutsu's and such you've mentioned, especially since your using custom ones.--
"Just the idea of that bruised my very soul a little bit. So now when I die and go to whatever awaits, I'm going to have a big, purple mark on my arm. And I won't be able to stop touching it to see if it's stopped hurting. For all eternity."
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If you become a monster to put down a monster you've still got a monster running around at the end of the day and have as such not really solved the whole monster problem at all.
You might also want to throw in a translation for all the jutsu's and such you've mentioned, especially since your using custom ones.--
"Just the idea of that bruised my very soul a little bit. So now when I die and go to whatever awaits, I'm going to have a big, purple mark on my arm. And I won't be able to stop touching it to see if it's stopped hurting. For all eternity."
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If you become a monster to put down a monster you've still got a monster running around at the end of the day and have as such not really solved the whole monster problem at all.