Quote: Timote wrote:Er... Ooops? (^_^
he can't have his (favorite) avatar while trying to save the world he made.
I think you missed a word in there.
So I assume that at first the girls think it's actually Zeke, but discover it's really Raven sometime before Zeke gets back?
Should be:
he can't have his (favorite) avatar dying while trying to save the world he made.
Yeah, at first they think it's Zeke... until the first fight breaks out about five minutes later.
Actually, it may be interesting to have Raven justsit back for a little bit and size up the situation that his avatar is in before having him put his foot down.