Quote:I beg to differ here. I did that once before, and I found that I had entire paragraphs that fell flat from 'inactivity' on the character's parts - they simply didn't seem lively, so I mixed it up as much as possible and it seems to play well with my writing style now. Of course, I try to never use anything that isn't immediately discernable for someone with less than a sixth grade reading level.The thing is, you can write an entire conversation without using any speech verbs, if you pay attention to what you're doing. That said, I agree with you, but still I'd do so very sparingly. Mix it up -- a little of each variety in every conversation you write that's long enough to need it.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.