The end there reminds me of a Pink Floyd song.
I'd like to say how refreshing it is to see a story where a creator respects weaponry. Not in the "this is awesomely destructive" sense, but rather "this is a weapon and if I don't handle it properly someone WILL die". It's something nice to see in this age of media-glorified gun fights written by people who haven't the faintest idea how to correctly handle firearms.
As for the latest chapter, that was a VERY well done extended fight scene. I especially like how much of a role the environment played in the proceedings.
But you've also done something else that I think has great importance to the long-term of this (now greatly) altered version of Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon. In terms of it's impact on the city and its inhabitants this firefight is a hell of a lot more overt than any of the other skirmishes the Senshi had gotten into up to this point, which means a much larger investigation into what the heck happened. Especially when scientists discover that the center of the explosion is radioactive: that's going a raise a whole host of concerned eyebrows. And considering their involvement, I wonder how favorably the authorities are going to react to the Senshi from here on out.
Pink Floyd Wrote:The sun is in the east
Even though the day is done
Two suns in the sunset
Could be the human race is run
Like the moment when the brakes lock
And you slide towards the big truck
(Oh, no!)
You stretch the frozen moments with your fear
And you'll never hear their voices
(Daddy, daddy!)
And you'll never see their faces
You have no recourse to the law any more
- from "Two Suns in the Sunset", by Pink Floyd from the album The Final Cut
I'd like to say how refreshing it is to see a story where a creator respects weaponry. Not in the "this is awesomely destructive" sense, but rather "this is a weapon and if I don't handle it properly someone WILL die". It's something nice to see in this age of media-glorified gun fights written by people who haven't the faintest idea how to correctly handle firearms.
As for the latest chapter, that was a VERY well done extended fight scene. I especially like how much of a role the environment played in the proceedings.
But you've also done something else that I think has great importance to the long-term of this (now greatly) altered version of Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon. In terms of it's impact on the city and its inhabitants this firefight is a hell of a lot more overt than any of the other skirmishes the Senshi had gotten into up to this point, which means a much larger investigation into what the heck happened. Especially when scientists discover that the center of the explosion is radioactive: that's going a raise a whole host of concerned eyebrows. And considering their involvement, I wonder how favorably the authorities are going to react to the Senshi from here on out.