Quote:"Between your beauty and your position in our family, everyone with a Y-chromosome practically grovels at your feet and you, my daughter, have grown too soft and complacent! It's about time someone threw something other than flowers at your feet." -- The repetition of "at your feet" makes this sound clumsy; I suggest changing the second instance to just "at you".On the other hand, Mister Invader is portrayed in canon as both intelligent and apparently less-than-polished at social interaction. He may be speaking clumsily on purpose, to get the humans to underestimate him.
I agree on the other points Bob raised. (Oh, yes - http://www.karmakula.co.uk/index.php?ac ... oductId=83]here's a lei line.)
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012