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Request for prereader
 
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Just read through all of it. Very good stuff. Since the last chapter is still fresh in my mind, I thought I'd mention that the idea of the sets of memories merging to become one person puts a pretty unique spin on the whole self-insert trope. I like it a lot.
Edit: Oh - and the Psychological break was handled superbly - and I love your version of Misato even more for her attempt at helping.
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Request for prereader - by Dartz - 07-26-2010, 10:13 PM
Good Self insert - by hmelton - 07-29-2010, 05:02 AM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 07-29-2010, 06:18 AM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 07-29-2010, 03:09 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-29-2010, 04:44 PM
[No subject] - by Logan Darklighter - 07-29-2010, 06:47 PM
[No subject] - by Acyl - 08-07-2010, 08:28 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 08-08-2010, 03:52 AM
[No subject] - by Logan Darklighter - 08-10-2010, 11:19 PM
[No subject] - by Logan Darklighter - 09-08-2010, 12:00 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-08-2010, 04:18 AM
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