Quote:It's well written, but I think suffering from having a perfect super-Harry. He's not making mistakes, being smooth and wise and powerful and picking up incredibly useful and powerful magic devices.
It wouldn't be Harry Dresden without screw ups, social disaster and bittersweet endings.
harry dresden is, as mentioned in the story, usually the underdog... right now, harry is a 20-something dealing with the problems of an 11 year old... i fully expect him to, eventually, try to waltz his way through a problem only to find out it's a little bigger than he expected.... at least, i hope that happens
-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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If architects built buildings the way programmers write programs, the first woodpecker to come along would destroy civilization.