So... since all my good stuff is on the other laptop... I've decided to go ahead and take a shot at rewriting DSKS.
One major change that I'm going to try out is writing everything in third person, so there won't be any jarring shifts from one character's POV to another... though personally I think it strips something from the story - that particular character's 'flavor' of context. We'll see, though.
Are there any highlights that anyone feels are too good to let go?
EDIT: If you want to find the chapters I've posted here on the forums, just hit the tag 'dskswdyhms' and look for the draft chapter topics.
One major change that I'm going to try out is writing everything in third person, so there won't be any jarring shifts from one character's POV to another... though personally I think it strips something from the story - that particular character's 'flavor' of context. We'll see, though.
Are there any highlights that anyone feels are too good to let go?
EDIT: If you want to find the chapters I've posted here on the forums, just hit the tag 'dskswdyhms' and look for the draft chapter topics.