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[RFC][dskswdyhms] Awesome Villain?
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01-08-2011, 11:20 AM
If I may make a suggestion, when Chaos and your OC god collide, instead of the OC god winning out, however narrowly, could they instead fuse together, forming an amalgam (heh) of their best (worst?) parts? From the viewpoint of a reader, that would be less annoying than an OC co-opting the position of a canon character, the Big Bad in this case. Maybe they end up becoming a sort of Ouroboros, as Chaos is the canon source of all evil and corruption, IIRC, and you OC god sound like where those who have been corrupted eventually end up.
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[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-07-2011, 09:56 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-08-2011, 05:02 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-08-2011, 08:28 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-08-2011, 09:13 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-08-2011, 11:20 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-08-2011, 11:41 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-08-2011, 01:02 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-08-2011, 04:33 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-09-2011, 04:07 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-09-2011, 11:32 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-10-2011, 04:18 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 01-10-2011, 06:13 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-10-2011, 06:38 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-11-2011, 01:24 AM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 01-11-2011, 01:46 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-11-2011, 06:15 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-11-2011, 06:41 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-11-2011, 12:47 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-11-2011, 02:28 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-11-2011, 05:43 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-12-2011, 06:45 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-12-2011, 07:35 AM
[No subject] - by Rod.H - 01-12-2011, 09:07 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-12-2011, 09:45 AM
[No subject] - by Rod.H - 01-12-2011, 12:45 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-12-2011, 12:58 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 01-12-2011, 05:29 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 01-12-2011, 06:25 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-14-2011, 06:18 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-14-2011, 06:55 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-14-2011, 09:15 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 01-14-2011, 10:39 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-14-2011, 11:34 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-15-2011, 01:11 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-15-2011, 03:41 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-15-2011, 07:08 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 01-15-2011, 10:24 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 01-16-2011, 07:01 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-16-2011, 07:20 AM
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