I need to take a break from my Project anyways.
Let's see. If you want to include Puella Magi, you're going to have to see how it fits in, since it brings in Cosmic Horror to your story.
Let's see. If you want to include Puella Magi, you're going to have to see how it fits in, since it brings in Cosmic Horror to your story.
- The aliens represented by Kyubei could be very powerful, as they can alter reality to grant "any miracle" a perspective girl wishes. It kinda left open ended as to whether the act of transforming a girl into a Puella Magi "empowers" the wish or if it's an exchange with the wish provided by the aliens. If it's the latter, then you're basically facing Lovecraftian gods. If it's the former, then their power is rather limited.
- The girls who become Puella Magi cannot be restored. This supports the transformation empowers the wish stand: basically nothing short of McGuffin power can restore them. And even if they could be restored, wouldn't that undo the wish? I'm thinking that the best that could be done for them is to stabilize their Soul Gems, preventing their eventual demise. That's best case--worst case is that you have a group of eldritch horrors to deal with, and sorrowful memories of who they once were...
- With other extraterrestial powers in play, why are Kyubei's... people targetting Earth. It can't be because no one else has emotions, since we know better. My bet: Earth is a soft target--they find out about the Senshi and TSAB later.... hmm In a way, it's like the first main arc of Sailor Moon, written large. Heck a single spawned witch could empower one of the Big Baddies from Sailor Moon. That would be a switch--someone else takes out a witch, and Kyubei decides to figure out who's moving in on his territory.