Ah, I see. Don't worry about lots of questions/suggestions being "bad" - there's always a lot of things that seem different to someone who knows only what you put on the page, rather than the whole thought process. It's the whole reason to do this kind of comment process, to help the words say to others what you meant when you wrote them. (Plus the various spelling/grammar catches that your brain glosses over due to knowing what's supposed to be there, of course.) I'm happy to help; more, higher quality fanfiction on the net is a win for all of us.
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows