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[RFC][SI][Multi-Xover] Being You is (Even More) Suffering
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#27
08-15-2014, 03:43 PM
Hmm.  Feels sort of Clay-ex-machina-ish, but you did foreshadow it, and dimension-skipping is difficult to do any other way...
I'll do a proper editing pass in a couple days- probably Sunday or Monday, as I'll be at the coast then- but the only thing that really stuck out at me reading the conclusion is that Dr. Clay should've said 'demise'.  'Demize' is the end of a small town in Mississippi.
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[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-02-2014, 11:10 PM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 08-02-2014, 11:28 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-03-2014, 03:24 PM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 08-03-2014, 09:27 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 08-04-2014, 01:50 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 08-04-2014, 02:42 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-07-2014, 12:27 AM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-07-2014, 01:07 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-07-2014, 01:32 AM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 08-07-2014, 02:52 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-07-2014, 09:49 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 08-07-2014, 11:15 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 08-07-2014, 12:55 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 08-07-2014, 02:43 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-07-2014, 03:02 PM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-07-2014, 05:09 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-11-2014, 11:46 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 08-11-2014, 01:20 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-11-2014, 05:56 PM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-11-2014, 06:52 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-14-2014, 09:33 AM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-15-2014, 03:58 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-15-2014, 05:06 AM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-15-2014, 05:41 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-15-2014, 06:15 AM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-15-2014, 03:43 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-15-2014, 07:01 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-21-2014, 01:28 PM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-23-2014, 03:41 AM
[No subject] - by Bluemage - 08-24-2014, 12:50 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 08-24-2014, 11:08 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 08-24-2014, 10:21 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 08-25-2014, 02:12 AM
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