Something I'd like to see in this is Spike getting an older male role-model. Someone to help him get past the butt-monkey role he too often gets stuck in.
I'm trying to get a handle on the translation effect you have going here, and it seems odd to me that you have something that is maybe one step above Hulk-speak but somehow the following
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No, I don't believe the world has gone mad. In order for it to go mad it would need to have been sane at some point.
I'm trying to get a handle on the translation effect you have going here, and it seems odd to me that you have something that is maybe one step above Hulk-speak but somehow the following
Quote:“Seventy-six-point-two-five percent iron. Point-seven-five percent carbon. Four percent chromium. One percent vanadium.” I then grinned as I knew the last bit would knock her for a loop. “And eighteen percent tungsten.”gets communicated loud and clear.
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No, I don't believe the world has gone mad. In order for it to go mad it would need to have been sane at some point.