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[DSKSWDYHMS] Continuity Whoopsie
[DSKSWDYHMS] Continuity Whoopsie
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Well, I found a big one earlier last night while reviewing things.  Check it out:
Quote:“Oh, speaking of things in the air,” said Usagi suddenly.

“Raven’s breath, here we go...”

“What is up between you and Rei?”

“Heeh?” said Naru cutely.  “Did something happen last night?”

Kaname scoffed.  “I should say so!  This friend of Usagi’s?  Hino Rei?  Miko at the Hikawa Shrine?  Gorgeous girl that goes to that super-upscale girls academy downtown?  You’d think she’d be some proper and reserved little hime-chan.  And she probably is most of the time.  But apparently Zee-kun’s mere existence is enough to make little miss perfection go completely thermonuclear.”

I had to stifle a snort at that - if only Kaname knew who Rei really was, then she’d know that ‘thermonuclear’ would be putting it a bit mildly.
“Heee-eeeehhh?” said Naru.  “But I've seen her before!  She’s always so cool and collected, even when other boys try to ask her out or hit on her.  Did she really get angry?”
Kaname laughed.  “She tried attacking him!  And then Zee-kun laid her out like this happens to him every day!  I swear if it hadn't been so scary at the time I would have laughed when it happened.”

Thing is, Kaname had left the shrine before Rei went all Aries-style explodey on Zeke.

Now, I have some idea of how to fix this - I still want Kaname to be the one to drop the bomb, especially since Rei seems to be the sort of girl that rubs her the wrong way (Kaname is, after all, the Alpha-Bitch of her own turf).  I just want to hear what you guys have in mind, first.
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[DSKSWDYHMS] Continuity Whoopsie - by Black Aeronaut - 05-25-2015, 09:43 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 05-26-2015, 12:49 AM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 06-01-2015, 10:24 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-05-2015, 01:58 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-05-2015, 03:24 PM

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