Bob Schroeck Wrote:There are three new chapters of Kinsfire's Betrayed, starting http://kinsfire.fanficauthors.net/Betra ... s_Learned/]here. Unfortunately, I think it's turning into a Harry Sue kind of story if only for the girls that fall into his lap, and how quickly they do so, in the course of these chapters.
and not a particularly good one, either... it started out as an interesting premise, but it quickly approached the point where i was half-expecting him to get laser eyes for Hedwig....
-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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If architects built buildings the way programmers write programs, the first woodpecker to come along would destroy civilization.