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Finishing Chapter Two
Finishing Chapter Two
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(If you don't want to see a random complaint about the writing process, feel free to close this thread now.)

The fight at the end of chapter two -- the one with Jadeite at the radio station at the end of episode three -- is driving me nuts.  I've written or started to write three different versions of it now, and none of them worked.  I wish I could figure out what it was that my subconscious wants out of this scene, because I'd gladly provide it.  At this point it's entirely possible that I want this chapter to be done far more than any of you do.

-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-28-2017, 08:40 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-02-2017, 03:36 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by DeputyJones - 10-02-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-03-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-03-2017, 11:54 AM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Shepherd - 08-29-2017, 06:27 AM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-29-2017, 02:29 PM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by robkelk - 08-29-2017, 02:40 PM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-29-2017, 03:02 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by robkelk - 10-03-2017, 07:57 AM

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