I love Travolore like a brother, but his writing on Star Wars: Bare Squadron could often benefit from an editor. Or a proofreader. Or just somebody to tell him where commas don't go and where they definitely do.
Happily, he's been gracious enough to let somebody who understands these things write his own take on the adventures of our favorite honorary Wookiees. The first chapter of the remake went up the other day at dA, and I'm listing it here, rather than as an update, because it's starting from the beginning or some place like it:
https://tu49.deviantart.com/art/Star-War...-733715705
Happily, he's been gracious enough to let somebody who understands these things write his own take on the adventures of our favorite honorary Wookiees. The first chapter of the remake went up the other day at dA, and I'm listing it here, rather than as an update, because it's starting from the beginning or some place like it:
https://tu49.deviantart.com/art/Star-War...-733715705