RE: Can someone check a scene for me.
03-30-2018, 01:44 PM (This post was last modified: 03-30-2018, 01:45 PM by classicdrogn.)
03-30-2018, 01:44 PM (This post was last modified: 03-30-2018, 01:45 PM by classicdrogn.)
No technical errors jump out at me, though I can't tell you if anything about the characterization is off - I know just enough about ASOIAF to know a colossal asshole who desperately deserves it just got his shit kicked in and one of the close-to-actually-innocents rescued, but barely recognize the name of the crossover.