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A CYOA in Worm or I think my name is No No
RE: A CYOA in Worm or I think my name is No No
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Interesting, but the perspective shifting is rather jarring for so short a segment. You've got three different people at the helm for only about a thousand words it looks like? But the progression is good, and we learn what NoNo's power is. (And another reason the Director doesn't have as much of a grudge: she can shut down those uppity capes.)
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RE: A CYOA in Worm or I think my name is No No - by Niteflier - 09-22-2018, 11:59 PM

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