RE: [RFC] Going Native. (With Edits)
10-01-2018, 02:30 PM (This post was last modified: 10-01-2018, 03:32 PM by Dartz.)
10-01-2018, 02:30 PM (This post was last modified: 10-01-2018, 03:32 PM by Dartz.)
Actually, now that I think about it, that scene could probably be chopped too and re-arranged to a later part. Then expanded with two additional parts to actually bring the story to a point.
I think this basically cut the wrodcount in half. More than in half. To get to the same place
I think this basically cut the wrodcount in half. More than in half. To get to the same place
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Fall upon us.
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To Peace everlasting.
Fall upon us.
Deliver us in fire
To Peace everlasting.