That's nice and natural with a good flow. Belldandy has Presence and solves things properly by using that presense.
A little moderation is helpful. We all have the best intentions but reality often has a different interpretation of our actions
Quote:(Honestly, this was something that kinda hacked me off about Fenspace, that Mal would take stuff my character does and try to portray it in a negative light because "I'm human" and therefore am duty-bound to make mistakes.)
A little moderation is helpful. We all have the best intentions but reality often has a different interpretation of our actions
Oh sweet meteor of death
Fall upon us.
Deliver us in fire
To Peace everlasting.
Fall upon us.
Deliver us in fire
To Peace everlasting.