RE: [IC][WIP][Arc 1] How I Managed to Quit Worrying and Love The Grief Seed
04-19-2019, 09:06 AM
04-19-2019, 09:06 AM
(04-18-2019, 11:21 PM)Labster Wrote: As Hild spoke, Washu wheeled out one of her hospital beds. In it was Alcia,
You spelled Alicia and Washu-chan wrong
It isn't in dialogue - I think we're safe leaving off the "-chan".
(04-18-2019, 11:21 PM)Labster Wrote: road to hell
should be spelled: Hel
But Rob and Hyoga haven't been to Hvergelmir yet...
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada


