New Fic Recomendations: The flipside of Sturgeon's Law

[Jorlem]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7733386/1/ Harry-Potter-and-the-Puppet-of-Time

Time travel. It's always about Potter. Draco Malfoy doesn't like that fact, but there is no one else who has the power to change the world. Sending his memories to his younger self he hopes to create a better future.

I got most of the way through the first chapter before giving up.  The prose was just hard to read, and the author wasn't able to keep his details straight.  For example, at one point, one of the characters states that the Malfoy's do not have a pensieve, as Lucius gave the one that belonged to their family to Voldemort, who hid it, and that they can't afford to buy another one (aren't the Malfoys supposed to be one of the richest families in Magical Britain?)  Then, further down the page, that same character uses the ancestral Malfoy pensieve for a rather horrific bit of personality murder.
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Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber."  --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.