Quote://We have been unconscious due to cerebral blunt force trauma for 4hours, 32 minutes Due to loss of vehicular control on arrival and loss of vehicular stability. //
Not your beta, but this caught my eye during that round of corrections: Insert a space between 4 and hours. Actually, I'd put the time spent unconscious before "due to cerebral blunt force trauma, and rephrase the rest as "resulting from loss of vehicular control and stability on arrival." This reduces repetition (two occurrences of "due" as well as the already noted two occurrences of "vehicular") and puts the proximate and underlying causes of unconsciousness together.