"Dance of Shiva"

[Labster]

OK, the weird thing I see so far is that the document is not valid HTML/XML.  What a "</br>" is doing there I don't know... there are also some paragraphs that begin with </p> for some reason.

Next, s/tatoo/tattoo/g.

Finally for today, I saw "Dr. Pepper", which after discussions at programming conferences, I have been convinced that such beverage contains caffeine but no period.  Wikipedia says they lost their punctuation in the 1950s.  Maybe not worth changing.

EDIT:

but most of the concert participants weren't exactly rolling in dough, yet anyway.

This either needs to be "dough (yet, anyway)." or "dough -- yet, anyway."  I can't read it without the pause between the two words, there must be some grammatical reason for that.

"three eyed" needs to become "three-eyed".  /me looks up grammar... because it's a compound modifier.