Dartz Wrote:Yes.
I said as much to the author when they posted it on another forum. It's the 'Where are they now' Epilogue just bolted on to the end that does it. It'd been an awesome fic.... so why ruin it with a bolt-on like that?
The where are they now felt a bit like the ending of A's to be honest so at least he's keeping with the source material.
But I agree with werehawk, the last two chapters kind of felt rushed and lacking in quality, and the battles felt way onesided far more than they have for most of the fic.
Particularly the battle for Tokyo was a very big disapointment.
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E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."